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在支持性和健康的环境中抚养所有儿童至关重要。我认为,在大城市里养育年轻人比在农村地区养育年轻人更有利。我有这种感觉,主要有两个原因,我将在下一篇文章中进行探讨。

首先,城市包括大量的学术和文化设施,所有这些都有助于儿童的智力发展。定期访问这些地方的孩子无疑会对其中的一些变得非常感兴趣。我自己的经验就是一个令人信服的例子。当我小的时候,我住在一个主要的城市地区,所以我的父母几乎每个周末都可以轻松地带我去参加文化活动。我们参加了当地图书馆的读书活动,整个城市许多美术馆的艺术展览以及夏季的文学节。参加这些郊游活动的结果使我对艺术表现形式产生了浓厚的兴趣,并决定在大学主修音乐。现在,我作为唱片艺术家享有成功的职业生涯。如果我没有像年轻人那样去过那么多刺激的地方,

其次,生活在城市中的儿童与各行各业的人接触,而在农村中的儿童只能与一种人交流。城市通常是吸引新移民到我国的磁铁,城市人口众多,来自不同种族和文化背景。我认为让孩子有来自不同行业的朋友很有用。例如,我的堂兄在纽约长大,纽约是我国最大的城市。到她十岁的时候,她已经结识了来自五大洲的朋友。尽管她仍然只是一名大学生,但她可以与会说多种语言并且宗教信仰与自己的信仰不同的人进行互动。此外,她最近提到,她能够在一家寻求国际视野的公司中找到工作。因此,我认为居住在城市中的人们可以享受各种有益的互动。

最后,我坚信儿童在城市长大要比在农村长大更有利。这是因为城市拥有各种各样的教育场所,而且城市人口众多且大都会。(415字)

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         It is critically important that all children be raised in a supportive and healthy environment. In my opinion, it is more advantageous to raise young people in major city, than to raise them in a rural area.  I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

      First of all, cities include a vast number of academic and cultural facilities, all of which help the intellectual development of children.  A child who visits such places on a regular basis will undoubtedly become extremely interested in some of them. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was young I lived in a major urban area, so my parents could easily take me to a cultural event almost every weekend.  We attended book readings at the local library, art openings at many of the galleries throughout the city, and literary festivals during the summer. As a result of attending these outings I developed a strong interest in artistic expression, and decided to major in music at university. Now I enjoy a successful career as a recording artist. Had I not visited so many stimulating places as a youngster, I would not be thriving like I am today.

         Secondly, children who live in cities are exposed to people from many walks of life, while those in the countryside communicate with only one type of person.  Cities are usually magnets for new immigrants to my country, and are populated by individuals from a variety of ethnic and cultural backgrounds. I think it is useful for children to have friends who come from different walks of life.  For instance, my young cousin is growing up in New York, which is the largest city in my country. By the time she was ten years old, she had made friends from five different continents. Although she is still just a college student, she is comfortable interacting with people who speak a variety of languages and who have religious beliefs that are different from her own. Moreover, she recently mentioned that she was able to find employment at a company looking for workers with an international perspective.  Accordingly, I think that people who live in cities can enjoy a variety of beneficial interactions.

       In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is better for children to grow up in cities than in rural areas.  This is because cities are home to a variety of educational venues, and because they have very diverse and cosmopolitan populations. (415 words)
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